Staying Home Shared Slideshow

Their are 5 people in my group, our group is Danny we were reading a fiction book called Staying Home, it is a story about a girl named Greta who got bullied by girls because of her hair cut and a boy who kept on stealing her stuff but then gave it back a day later.  and we had to make a mindmup to explain the story and the is my:
( the first one is a example)
and their are the other peoples work

2 people had to comment on the post and give feedback Kylie said "Hi Ella, I really like how you added a lot of information for each and every idea so then the reader can understand what your talking about. Next time I think you should work on the feelings and add like which person felt that way. But over all it was really good."  and the other person was Manuk he said "Hi Ella,
I like how you added explanations to all the topic's and all of them are really specific and maybe next time you could just add more info on all the topics. Do you have any feed back for me?  what was your favourite mindmup?

Praying with the Psalms

Our class has been making psalms, Mrs Lee (our teacher) made a slideshow with psalms and we had to pick a verse for everyday of the week and Mrs Lee would ask us to share what we said. we have been doing this for 2 weeks now and I like doing it. what verse do you like?

here is my:

sorry unfinished