We had to make a machines that would help Isaak do his Job:
my less favourite bit was explaining how I did it
Wednesday, 6 November 2019
Sniffer dog Tm4 Wk4
we are reading a nonfiction text this week and it is about sniffer dogs and we learnt about how this dog called Isaak who is 3 years old and loves to work and he finds fruits and vegetables, plant and plants material, meat ,live birds, eggs and reptiles
We had to make a machines that would help Isaak do his Job:
my favourite part was to make the machine
my less favourite bit was explaining how I did it
We had to make a machines that would help Isaak do his Job:
my less favourite bit was explaining how I did it
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Hey Ella,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a lot of detail.
I also used some sort of x-ray thing but it is used on a conveyor belt instead.
Next time could you explain how it will help Isaak.
Hi Tyler
Deletethanks for the comment
Hi Ella, I really like how you explained of what your machine can do and you have added lots of detail in your explanation. Next time I think you could add some of your own picture and like not get it from google so like maybe draw your own images!
ReplyDeleteBut overall great job!
- Kylie
Hi Kylie
Deletethanks for the comment
Hi Ella, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love you detail and effort you put into your blog post, It looks awesome better than what I could've done. AWESOME WORK ELLA!!!
Kind regards,
Bella
Hi Bella
Deletethanks for the comment
Hi Ella,I'm Mykiala from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI love the detail you have put in with the phiture.
Did you think about adding some more info about the dog.
Why did you decide to do it.
Keep up your great work!!
Mykiala YMS!!!!!!
Hi Mykiala
Deletethanks for the comment
Hi Ella :))
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post of yours. It's interesting. I hope to see more blog posts like this.
First of all, I really like how you added detail and lots of colour to show what the things were. I also like how you added a side bit with information about what you created.
I think overall the only thing you need to work on is maybe put the name of what the things are in the suit case.
Q: Did you find it hard to create this with all the things you had to put inside the suitcase?
-Mya <3
Hi Mya
Deletethanks for the comment
Hello,Ella
ReplyDeleteI am Delilah from Yaldhurst model school
I really like your blog post it was AMAZING I loved the part how you have a lot of colour but next time you could add a little bit more writing.That is great how they the year 3s liked your creation I loved the part also went you draw the lines to the food.
great job (:
kind regards Delilah
Hi Ella, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way you added food in your sniffer dog backpack. Did you think about putting water so the dog doesn't get thirsty. Next time, you could add a background so it's a bit eye catching.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards, Zahrah!