Hi Ella, I really liked your post about Pentecost it reminded me about what I did about Pentecost!. Maybe you could talk about what happened at Pentecost more.
I liked the way you added detail to your work and you also wrote some speech marks. Did you think about more information about it. Next time, you could write more about him and do detail. What made you make the post?
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Hi Ella, I really liked your post about Pentecost it reminded me about what I did about Pentecost!. Maybe you could talk about what happened at Pentecost more.
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ReplyDeleteI like your Pentecost slideshow. I like how you made the title. Can you add some pictures to also tell us what the event is too.
hello Ella Your slideshow is very detailed maybe make it a bit more colorful just a bit.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added detail to your work and you also wrote some speech marks. Did you think about more information about it. Next time, you could write more about him and do detail. What made you make the post?
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