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Wednesday, 23 October 2019

Term 4 week 2 Vanila Ice Cream Please

It is week two and our story is about how to make vanilla ice cream and it told us where they make and how they make it, I made this on a mindmup, mindmup is where you can put all your information in things and if you want more information you just click a box and you have one more box.
this is my mindmup:


 my favourite part was finding all the information in the book

 my least favourite part was to put all the information that I found in too the mindmup

 what is your favourite ice cream flavor?
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11 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 October 2019 at 13:32

    Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I like the way you made the mindmup.

    Did you think about what colours you used for you mindmup?

    Next time you could try add a little bit more detail.

    My favorite flavor of ice cream is vanilla.

    (: Kind Regards Jorja :)

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  2. Anonymous23 October 2019 at 13:59

    Hi there Ella! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!

    Wow Ella! I love the Mindmup! It looks really cool!

    To be honest, I don't really know what a mindmup is! By how you're describing it, it sounds like it is some sort of website. Or a type of learning?? I don't know!! So please tell meeeeee! o(╥﹏╥)o

    Next time, perhaps you could tell us more of why the book even had how to make ice cream.

    Also, answering your question, My favourite flavor is probably strawberry.

    How do you use mindmup?

    From Hana

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    1. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:32

      Hi Hana
      thank you for your comment a mindmup is a website you can put information in little boxes and just keep on added information you should try to do a mindmup

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  3. Anonymous23 October 2019 at 14:04

    hi Ella, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
    I like your ice-cream story, it made me hungry.
    Kind regards,
    Bella

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    1. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:33

      Thanks Bella for the comment

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  4. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:19

    Hey Ella, I really like how you added like the questions and then you started writing all the facts and stuff lie that so people could understand better. Maybe next time you could add a little like head start in your description about the story like who found out about how to make vanilla ice cream.

    But over all you did really good!
    My favorite Ice cream is probably the rainbow one or cookies and cream.

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    1. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:34

      Thanks Kylie for th comment I will change that

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  5. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:20

    Hi Ella,

    I like how you have all the information on the mindmup.

    When I made my flow chart because that's what it says on the activity's I used a google drawing for picture's.

    Just so you know in the how you cure the beans, you were spelling drying but you had an f in stead of a g for ing.

    Apart from that this is pretty good.

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    1. Anonymous24 October 2019 at 10:35

      Thank you for your comment

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  6. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 14:00

    Hi my name is Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you added the information separately. Did you think about putting a drawing of your work.

    Regards Zahrah!

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