Ella make the start sentences a bit longer and make the lettering A bit bigger to. you could spread the letters out more to or write a bit more. I like your title. Grace.
Kia Ora, Ella. I like the country you chose.I like how you used detail and explained it well. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information and like what we would haft to take if we went on a holiday to Mexico. How hot does it get in Mexico?
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Ella make the start sentences a bit longer and make the lettering A bit bigger to. you could spread the letters out more to or write a bit more. I like your title.
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Kia Ora, Ella. I like the country you chose.I like how you used detail and explained it well. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information and like what we would haft to take if we went on a holiday to Mexico. How hot does it get in Mexico?
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