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Thursday, 15 November 2018

The Party Gone Wrong

we were just playing around but then it all changed, We went to far and and it all happend to fast
 this happen

I was in my room and then I heard a knock on the door and then we decide to play truth or dare. Paige I said Truth or Dare Truth she said lame I thought in my head do you like someone yes she said who who I keeped on saying fine I'll tell you It is Matt ohh Kylie and I said shh Paige said. Ok Paige

sorry this is not finshed

3 comments:

  1. hi ella i really like the start like how it changed also when you played truth or dare thats savage also the start it dossen't make sense but its still good

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  3. Hi Ella I like your story it make me feel I'm In the room with you. Put a bit more punctuation in I can't take a breath!
    Grace :)

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