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Monday, 1 July 2019



In room 5 we had the choice to pick a topic for our writing the choices were our favourite animal or personal hygiene, I choose our favourtie animal because I want to tell facts about it.
so here is my writing

My favourite animal is a panda because they have a nice big face  and I like their fur. I like their fur because it can camouflage into stuff like snow because part of their body is white and they can camouflage into the darkness because some of their body is black. I like their face because their jaws is powerful that’s why they can eat the bamboo and that is how they eat fruit too. That is why pandas are my favourite animal.

What is your favourite animal?

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.

    This is amazing.

    The facts you have used are really good.

    How come you like pandas?

    My favourite animal is a cat.

    (:Kind regards Jorja:)

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  2. Kia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
    I liked the way that you explained why you like that animal the most and i agree pandas are cute but my favorite animal is a red panda they are cut and sorta like cats
    You brought me back to when my favorite animal was penguins and i saw a little blue penguin in the Avon river
    Maybe you could add some facts about it that you also love about them that would make it much better because you could use that to get other people to like it

    Was the pandas always your favorite animal

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