Hansel and Gretel With A Twist

Room 4,5 and 6 got to go to the ballet, we only got to watch the second half because if we did both the 1st and 2nd half it would be to long. but after we watch the ballet we went back school and we thought of putting our own twist of Hansel and Gretel we could do it in any style I choose narrative and we had about a week to do this and my one is about the witch getting revenge on the dad and the step mum.
An this is my twist of Hansel and Gretel


It was dinner time and a family of 4 were eating bread this family was in a forest but they ate bread because they were poor Hansel and Gretel wanted to eat all the bread but when they went to bed their mum and dad made a plan. “They are eating all our food what are we going to do, we need to get rid of them” said their dad “We should sell them for money” their mum said “But how will by them they are 2 skinny little kids” But little did their parents know that they were listening and they heard everything but they couldn’t do anything because they were just kids. They went to there room and were scared to go to sleep because they thought would get them in their sleep and they were right when they tried to go to bed their parents picked them up and sent them to an old lady who wanted them, but that was a bad idea. “How much do I need to pay you” the old woman said “$100 each” the mum said happily So the old lady pulled out $500 and gave it to them and left and when she left her helpers were holding the kids. When Hansel and Gretel woke up they were in a big house “Wait Hansel where are we” said Gretel well crying “Yeah, Wow I haven’t seen a house this big in my life” said Hansel The witch came in the room and then fog went around her and her skin became green “AH” they scream “You will stay here forever” said the witch “are you guys hungry” “Yeah we are so hungry” said Hansel “Then here you go, you can eat all of this’’ The helpers came in with a lot of food that was shaking well they were carrying it, but Gretel had a bad feeling about it so she didn’t eat much but Hansel ate a lot,then the witch brought all different types of cakes and Hansel ate all of them. “Hansel if you eat too much you will get sick and fat” Gretel said “No it will be fine,” said the witch Keep eating she said “Hansel STOP EATING” said Gretel “No Hansel I’m your mother and I no what’s best for you” said the Witch “Wait your our mother” they said “Yeah“ said the witch with a tear running down to her face “Wait but dad said that you died well you guys were swimming with sharks” “No it is because when he came home I was stealing money from him so he kicked me out of the house” “But you have been alone with that awful step-mother that yells at you father” Hansel and Gretel were thinking to ask her if she has a partner and if she does who are they “Do you have any kids” “Yes I have 1 kids and 3 grandchildren” “Wait does that mean that I am Aunt and Gretel’s an Uncle said Hansel happily “Yeah are you excited” “NO” said Gretel angrily “YES” said Hansel jumping up and down Hansel was so excited but Gretel was sad because he thought he was old, but the witch was thinking of a plan to get back at the dad and the new wife and she knew that the kids would help her. “Guys I need help I want to get your dad and his new wife back for leaving me without you, can you please help” “Yeah of course we don’t like our step mom she is mean and doesn’t let us have much food and she only focus on dad and when dad was out she was talking with another man” “Wow, I didn't know she was that bad” the witch said with shock “Why didn’t you run away” ‘’We were scared we were going to get caught” they said ‘’Well are you excited for revenge” the witch said with a grin There plan was to break in to the house when dad wasn’t home and show him and record the man and the step -mother talking and then dad and step mom will breakup and then the kids can live with him again and maybe the mum so when dad was not home the kids and mum went to the house and saw the step mom talking with this guy and then they started recording them but the mum saw and then they started running away “We got the footage” said the witch laughing “We get our real mum back” said Hansel Now all they need to do is show the dad and step-mother would go and the kids would go back to him. After a couple of days they came back and then the step-mum was kicked out of the house and the witch got to stay in the house and they lived happily ever after.



have you watch  Hansel and Gretel?