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My favourite thing about this was was putting the family tradition
I thought it was quite hard to put information about the national flower because the was a lot of stuff about
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Kia ora,Im ax from Yaldhurst Model school. I enjoyed the part when you said about the national anthem. Did you think about puuting in some imform aytoon what the national bird is. Next time you could do the maroi verion of the national anthem as well. What made you have the idea of this blog. Goodbye from Max.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ella, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put a lot of detail and wrote about your family traditions and similar things.
This reminds me of someone else's blog about their taonga which are the things that are special to them.
To improve, you could make a more hooking title and make sure you are using the right grammer. Also make sure things are tidy and colourful to make it stand out to people.
Why did you do this blog?
Bye Ella, keep it up!
-Amelia 🦊