Hansel and Gretel With A Twist

Room 4,5 and 6 got to go to the ballet, we only got to watch the second half because if we did both the 1st and 2nd half it would be to long. but after we watch the ballet we went back school and we thought of putting our own twist of Hansel and Gretel we could do it in any style I choose narrative and we had about a week to do this and my one is about the witch getting revenge on the dad and the step mum.
An this is my twist of Hansel and Gretel


It was dinner time and a family of 4 were eating bread this family was in a forest but they ate bread because they were poor Hansel and Gretel wanted to eat all the bread but when they went to bed their mum and dad made a plan. “They are eating all our food what are we going to do, we need to get rid of them” said their dad “We should sell them for money” their mum said “But how will by them they are 2 skinny little kids” But little did their parents know that they were listening and they heard everything but they couldn’t do anything because they were just kids. They went to there room and were scared to go to sleep because they thought would get them in their sleep and they were right when they tried to go to bed their parents picked them up and sent them to an old lady who wanted them, but that was a bad idea. “How much do I need to pay you” the old woman said “$100 each” the mum said happily So the old lady pulled out $500 and gave it to them and left and when she left her helpers were holding the kids. When Hansel and Gretel woke up they were in a big house “Wait Hansel where are we” said Gretel well crying “Yeah, Wow I haven’t seen a house this big in my life” said Hansel The witch came in the room and then fog went around her and her skin became green “AH” they scream “You will stay here forever” said the witch “are you guys hungry” “Yeah we are so hungry” said Hansel “Then here you go, you can eat all of this’’ The helpers came in with a lot of food that was shaking well they were carrying it, but Gretel had a bad feeling about it so she didn’t eat much but Hansel ate a lot,then the witch brought all different types of cakes and Hansel ate all of them. “Hansel if you eat too much you will get sick and fat” Gretel said “No it will be fine,” said the witch Keep eating she said “Hansel STOP EATING” said Gretel “No Hansel I’m your mother and I no what’s best for you” said the Witch “Wait your our mother” they said “Yeah“ said the witch with a tear running down to her face “Wait but dad said that you died well you guys were swimming with sharks” “No it is because when he came home I was stealing money from him so he kicked me out of the house” “But you have been alone with that awful step-mother that yells at you father” Hansel and Gretel were thinking to ask her if she has a partner and if she does who are they “Do you have any kids” “Yes I have 1 kids and 3 grandchildren” “Wait does that mean that I am Aunt and Gretel’s an Uncle said Hansel happily “Yeah are you excited” “NO” said Gretel angrily “YES” said Hansel jumping up and down Hansel was so excited but Gretel was sad because he thought he was old, but the witch was thinking of a plan to get back at the dad and the new wife and she knew that the kids would help her. “Guys I need help I want to get your dad and his new wife back for leaving me without you, can you please help” “Yeah of course we don’t like our step mom she is mean and doesn’t let us have much food and she only focus on dad and when dad was out she was talking with another man” “Wow, I didn't know she was that bad” the witch said with shock “Why didn’t you run away” ‘’We were scared we were going to get caught” they said ‘’Well are you excited for revenge” the witch said with a grin There plan was to break in to the house when dad wasn’t home and show him and record the man and the step -mother talking and then dad and step mom will breakup and then the kids can live with him again and maybe the mum so when dad was not home the kids and mum went to the house and saw the step mom talking with this guy and then they started recording them but the mum saw and then they started running away “We got the footage” said the witch laughing “We get our real mum back” said Hansel Now all they need to do is show the dad and step-mother would go and the kids would go back to him. After a couple of days they came back and then the step-mum was kicked out of the house and the witch got to stay in the house and they lived happily ever after.



have you watch  Hansel and Gretel?

Heather The Weather Girl Week 7 Term 4

In the group Danny we were reading a text called Heather the weather girl it is a fiction story about a girl called Heather and she got hit by lighting and when she did she became a new person she could tell what the weather was for the next month so she was the next weather girl. Our task was to design a head gear that would protect you from a Storm, I did it on my device
This is my:

Why isn't the World Poo

Why isn't the world poo is a text about how dung beetles have saved the world from becoming poo.

Everyone in the class (not just groups) read a text about dung beetles some stuff in it was they can grow up to 2-3 cm long and they are everywhere in the world expect Antarctica but we had to choose 3 tasks from the task page and here is what I had to do.

for this one we had to tell facts about dung beetles and to list them all and that is what I did












This is the second task.

for this task we had to find out what some words were and there was plentiful plain herds and then you had to make a picture with all of those things and that is what I did













And this was my third task

my last task was to show how they carry the poo and make a picture of it and that is what I did












Have you ever seen a dung beetle

Turbo Lend a ear week 5 term 4

In reading we were unpacking a non fiction story called Turbo lends a ear this was about a family that was all deaf and they needed a dog. They got a dog it's name was Turbo it helped it inside of the house for example if there was  knock on the door they would not be able to hear it. But anyway  this week's task was to make a new creature or another animal that could help this disability so I made a cog that is a dog and a cat I choose this because they have a good sense of smell for example if the stove was burning they would know that and warn them about it  and have are good at hearing things so they could hear a knock on a door.

And this is what I came up with:

I really liked putting the information on the paper
I thought it was hard to make the drawing
what animal would you make?

Sniffer dog Tm4 Wk4

we are reading a nonfiction text this week and it is about sniffer dogs and we learnt about how this dog called Isaak who is 3 years old and loves to work and he finds fruits and vegetables, plant and plants material, meat ,live birds, eggs and reptiles 

We had to make a machines that would help Isaak do his Job:

my favourite part was to make the machine 

my less favourite bit was explaining how I did it