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Wednesday 27 November 2019

Heather The Weather Girl Week 7 Term 4

In the group Danny we were reading a text called Heather the weather girl it is a fiction story about a girl called Heather and she got hit by lighting and when she did she became a new person she could tell what the weather was for the next month so she was the next weather girl. Our task was to design a head gear that would protect you from a Storm, I did it on my device
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  1. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:23

    HELLO Ella!
    I love the way you added enough information. It is very easy to read. Instead of using text you can use labels so we could know what it is but for me it is pretty obvious :') Great Job!

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  2. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:24

    Hey Ella! I really like how you added how your device works and how it helps us. I also really liked how you putted like an actual person in the device so then other people can understand much better. This made me think about you wearing it and saving all of us from the thunder and lightening! Maybe next time you could add like some body armor like for your feet and legs and etc!

    But overall you did really good!

    - Kylie

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  3. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:30

    Hey Ella,

    I like how you made it out of metal and you used a lot of information.

    I didn't do anything like this, I used a bike helmet with a few modifications.

    Next time could you think of a name for the hat.

    I have no questions

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  4. Anonymous29 November 2019 at 09:33

    Hi Ella! First of all, nice blog post! I liked how you actually made the picture of what it was clear. I also like a person there, instead of just armour. This made me think what would happen in a storm if I had that, would it fly off or would I make it. I think next time you could give a name to it, not just call it a red thing!!

    But you did really good!

    -Mya

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