my favourite bit about this was being paired with them and hearing how different their ideas were than my
but it was hard because we all wanted the put our own ideas but I liked working with them
do you like this story?
Thursday, 19 September 2019
Where are my ballet shoes
The task in writing was Mrs Lee paired us with Groups of 3-4 and to make a story with a setting character and problem I was paired with Tweeny and Mark, our setting was a lake, our character was a giant and our problem was his ballet shoes and each of us had to make a story at of that and we made a slide show for the different parts and here is my:
my favourite bit about this was being paired with them and hearing how different their ideas were than my
but it was hard because we all wanted the put our own ideas but I liked working with them
do you like this story?
my favourite bit about this was being paired with them and hearing how different their ideas were than my
but it was hard because we all wanted the put our own ideas but I liked working with them
do you like this story?
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Kia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you told the story because it was funny. Next time you could make the story longer beause it was short. Why did the giant call the police.
ReplyDeleteWhy did the dinosaur not think beforenhe stole the shoes. Goodbye from Max.
Kia ora, I,m Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you told the story because it was funny. Next time you could make the story longer because it was short. Why did the giant call the police.
ReplyDeleteWhy did the dinosaur not think before he stole the shoes.
kind regards Delilah
Kia ora Ella, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lots of detail into the story.
This reminded me of when I did my long write about santa. Don't ask me I don't know why.
To improve, you could maybe make more of your own pictures, also, maybe add a simile or two.
What did other groups have to do?
Bye Ella!
-Amelia 😉
Kia,ora my name is Connor. I like the way you have pot giants on the cover.Did you fined your ballet shoes?Why did you do this?
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