Do you like the bottom of the sea now?
Thursday, 26 September 2019
What Is At The Bottom Of The Sea?
In the group Danny we were reading a book called What is at the bottom of the sea it is a non fiction story and it talks about the bottom of the sea and what lives down there, it was really fun making this post and I thought the text was very detail so it was easier to do the graph and this it my graph:
I found it easy to get the information and I found it hard to put all the information in to the slides
Do you like the bottom of the sea now?
Do you like the bottom of the sea now?
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Hey Ella!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe I am a year eight from Yaldhurst Model School.
Wow you blog post is fantastic!
Maybe next time you could on a slide instead of inserting all of the photos, because there are a lot of photos.
Maybe you could try biteable it makes your work more creative and awesome!! Make sure its not the 2.0 one because that one doesn't work. But well done because this blog is very good.
Also just wondering do you think you would be able to write more words saying why you are doing this?
Kind regards - Chloe
Kia Ora Ella, I really like how you added like lots of information to tell what is at the bottom of the sea and like what lives down there. I also like how you expanded more on fact three and you described what a dumbo octopus looks like. I think next time you could add a diagram showing like the Mariana trench or something. But overall it was really good!
ReplyDeleteHey Ella, I like how you have used Piktochart. I also used piktochart but I don't really like using piktochart. If I knew more about the bottom of the sea, I would've added it in to my piktochart. Next time you could work on punctuation and capital letters. I've got a question, in fact 1 you talk about some sort of rock, what rock?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ella,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rhys I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model School.
Maybe next time you can try biteable it makes your work better.
Make sure its not the second one because that one isn't as good. But good job because this blog is very good.
Maybe next time you could putting it on a slide instead of putting in the photos by themself.
Because there are quite a few photos.
Also just wondering do you think you would be able to write more about why you are doing it?
Kind regards
Rhys