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Thursday, 12 September 2019

Deep In The Forest

Deep in the Forest is a fictional story about a boy called Leith and his friends go in the forest and play games they like playing little battles and they had a friend group of 12 but now the have 3 and then his friends and him slit up because of the imaginary wolves  tried to chase them but then Leith actually got lost but then his cat found him:

This week our teacher Mrs Lee said we are not going to be having a shared slide show and and we are going to just put it on our blog and our group can comment on our blog and I create a mindmup  and this is my:

























My favourite part was the outcome I liked it because the cat found him and because the last bit of the book hooked you in it said it can lead  home but we don't now if he did go home

It was hard doing  the action because there was a lot of action
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  1. Anonymous13 September 2019 at 09:24

    Hi Ella, I really liked how you added lots of information for each idea and I know that because you added like lots and lots of blocks for each idea. Next time I think you should add who felt what for feelings like if you wrote happy I would ask "Who felt happy"? But over all your story map was really good!

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