This week our teacher Mrs Lee said we are not going to be having a shared slide show and and we are going to just put it on our blog and our group can comment on our blog and I create a mindmup and this is my:
My favourite part was the outcome I liked it because the cat found him and because the last bit of the book hooked you in it said it can lead home but we don't now if he did go home
It was hard doing the action because there was a lot of action
do you like the outdoors?
My favourite part was the outcome I liked it because the cat found him and because the last bit of the book hooked you in it said it can lead home but we don't now if he did go home
It was hard doing the action because there was a lot of action
do you like the outdoors?
Hi Ella, I really liked how you added lots of information for each idea and I know that because you added like lots and lots of blocks for each idea. Next time I think you should add who felt what for feelings like if you wrote happy I would ask "Who felt happy"? But over all your story map was really good!
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