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Wednesday, 16 October 2019

Return Ticket Please

it is week one and it is a non fiction text, this story is about mars and what the space is like and space company's plan, the task was to make a information web about what we learnt mindmup, a mindmup is site were you put information and you have a title and then have examples after.
this is mine mindmup: 







my favourite part of doing this was reading the story and learning all these facts about space because I didn't know much

it was hard to put all the information on the mindmup



2 comments:

  1. Heya Ella,

    How are you? Thats great.

    When I first saw your work pop up on my screen, I was surprised with how you added lots of information. But the first thing that I saw was a mistake with Venus. You spelt Vesus instead of Venus but thats fine, we all make mistakes.

    Great Job Ella!!

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    1. Thank for the comment I will change that soon

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