Horrible Forest
It was a dark night at 11pm it was very calm there was a full moon out and I was walking home from high school then I heard a scream, I didn’t know where it was coming from but I tried to find where. Then I just gave up I saw a girl in a white dress with blood on it I thought that it was just a design. Then she skipped around me singing ring-a-ring-a-rosie-a pocket full of posie a tissue-a -tissue we all fall down then another girl came she looked actually the same I got very scared now then they skipped around me singing ring-a-ring-a-rosie-a pocket full posie a tissue-a -tissue we all fall down they another girl came out and they sang ring-a-ring-a-rosie-a pocket full of posie a tissue-a -tissue we all fall down then another and a
another then they sang this ring-a-ring-a-rosie-a pocket full of posie a tissue-a -tissue we all pull you down and they all pulled me down then about a year then I came back up. And then thought it was a dream but I saw blood everywhere then I saw a head oww I said is that my own then I said that couldn't be then I wouldn’t be talking to myself right know I went home then I asked my mum if my best friend could come over and then she said “ yes but you have to do something inside” ok I said then but mum I said yes can you come with me why you can go yourself you have a car fine so I went to my friends house and then I was at my friends house and it took about 5 minutes to go to my friends house then he said do you want to see the movie that I just bought sure, then we watched the movie and it was so creepy that I peed my pants the and I had this dream that I saw a waggin. Then I ran and sat on it then I heard someone and they said in a very posh voice who is on my waggin and I was shocked that someone was inside of it then I jumped off and the lady had so much makeup I cried with laughter and she said what’s so funny then I said falling on the ground you and your makeup what is wrong with my makeup she said and she looked crazy she had powder on her face and lipstick way over her lips and her eyeliner was horrible umm how are you I said I’m miss potato head she said I have super powers omg you really have super powers. Yes I do, so what is your super power I can give people wishes how many only 3 my child ok I wish for this waggin to fly ok and then when I knew it it flew up into the air and then I jumped in with the lady. Then I said, I want an giant owl ok and a owl appeared right beside me. I will call you Jack cool. Then I said I want a hot boyfriend then she said ok here then this cute boy came out of nowhere then everything disappear then I woke up and my friend was gone then I went to my car and gone to the shop then there was a new shop called swords and swords and more swords (this is not a shop I just made it up) then I went inside there was lots and lots of boys I didn’t like it at all I’ll tell you why there were only to girls me and my new friends.
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, I like your story. I like the part where there’s a lot of girls pulling you to the ground. Next time you could add more full stops and commas. Why are there so many girls alone in the forest?
Kia ora Ella, I really like the story. My favorite part is when the same girls kept doing ring a ring a Rosie. Maybe next time you could put in who were you friends and add punctuation.
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