W.A.L.T write a descreiptive story based on a picture The goblins wish
we had to write a story about this guy who had lost a key and tried to find it and here is mine:
It was 3 days since it has gone missing. One minute he had held it then poof it was gone.
I was reading a book about trying to find a key so I could find it ,then a big bang came from the door. My dad (Peter) answered the door and then he started crying, so I quickly ran over and dad said “this is your twin sister’’ and I was shocked because I didn’t know that I had a twin sister. We looked the same we sounded the same we had the same clothes on the only thing we didn’t have in common was our eyes, I had blue and she had brown my dad soon stopped crying a few minutes later, at night I heard something come from room so I speed to my dad’s room. Then I saw my two bff turn into goblins then I saw that Gabbie had the key in her hand. I was about to run at them but then Gab said if you come any close to me I will chop your dads head off, then my dad said son just do it I may die but just do it. So I closed my eyes took a deep breathe and whispered to myself Jessie you can do this so I ran AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Hand then I smacked the sword out of there hand and then a black hole came out of nowhere and whooped them away we did it dad no you did it son and dad just froze then a knock on the door came and he got so scared he unfroze and a person was at the door it was my actually my twin how came all the way back from Ireland and then my mum came back from Norway and gave us clothes and a puppy we called Moze which is a girl.
I was reading a book about trying to find a key so I could find it ,then a big bang came from the door. My dad (Peter) answered the door and then he started crying, so I quickly ran over and dad said “this is your twin sister’’ and I was shocked because I didn’t know that I had a twin sister. We looked the same we sounded the same we had the same clothes on the only thing we didn’t have in common was our eyes, I had blue and she had brown my dad soon stopped crying a few minutes later, at night I heard something come from room so I speed to my dad’s room. Then I saw my two bff turn into goblins then I saw that Gabbie had the key in her hand. I was about to run at them but then Gab said if you come any close to me I will chop your dads head off, then my dad said son just do it I may die but just do it. So I closed my eyes took a deep breathe and whispered to myself Jessie you can do this so I ran AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Hand then I smacked the sword out of there hand and then a black hole came out of nowhere and whooped them away we did it dad no you did it son and dad just froze then a knock on the door came and he got so scared he unfroze and a person was at the door it was my actually my twin how came all the way back from Ireland and then my mum came back from Norway and gave us clothes and a puppy we called Moze which is a girl.
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