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Wednesday, 19 September 2018

The magic pill

The Blue Pill


The Blue Pill I was just opening my eyes then something was tapping me on  my head it was a little man and he said can you please give me butterflies and I said NO!! are you crazy then he said shh if you do that for be I’ll give you this magic pill it is blue and it





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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 10:17

    Hi Ella. I like how you added detail. I also like how you described the man. Maybe you could re-read and check your spelling.

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  2. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 13:30

    hi Ella i like your story but can you work on your spelling and put more detail into your story.

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